Criticizm is hard to take. i've found the best method to dish it out involves the "build 'em, burn 'em, build 'em" method.
First "Build 'em" up, ex:
Looking at your term paper i found it refreshing to see how descriptive and colerful your writing is.
Second "Burn 'em" down, ex:
however i did notice a lot of grammatical errors.
Third "Build 'em" back up, ex:
so, follow these tips to help round out your writing and you will be one of the strongest writers i have ever seen.
